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Hi Ani - glad to see you're starting in on the editing, but I'd like to see much more of the article's information retained as long as it is related to an Armenian. So please, redo this work without taking out so much of the article and I'll take another look at it. Thanks! --Raffi 18:28, 13 December 2007 (PST)

Your edits

Hi Ani - the edits you made to the Norma Karaian article are great, Thanks! I would also have left in the information that she died on the Sunday before January 18, 2005, and that her funeral services were held at St. James Armenian Church in Watertown on January 19, 2005. I would also include the information about the article under "sources" at the bottom. I am making these changes to the article so you can see what I mean. Thanks... --Raffi 06:44, 16 December 2007 (PST)

Markos Garabetyan

Hi Ani - again, good work on the newer articles. On the Markos Garabetyan page though, I'd like you to use the following information that you removed. (When in doubt, keep the information).

  • Garabetyan came to America from his native Turkey in 1976.
  • "We sell to all the other Armenian delis in town," Hayik Garabetyan says, and in turn Ohanyan's Deli carries pastries and breads from local Armenian bakeries.
  • But customers still come in for sandwiches. Above the counter is a sign advertising a lunch special: a turkey sandwich, soda and baklava for $4. "You cannot buy that in town anywhere," says Markos Garabetyan with a grin. "We try to bring the customers. Is business trick."

Thanks! --Raffi 01:05, 21 December 2007 (PST)

Ovidiu Ohanesian

Hi Ani - I was checking the changes to this article, and they don't seem like quite enough. Please do more rewriting... Thanks, Raffi

Copyright tag

Hi Ani, I was looking through some of your edits this week, and some of these articles are not being rewritten/worded enough to remove the {copy} tag at the bottom of the articles. There is still too much copyright material in them. Here is an example of the changes you made to an article: Alik Sarkasian. There are very large sections that have not been touched in any way. Please only remove the copyright tag when the entire article has been substantially rewritten. Thanks, --Raffi 07:47, 4 September 2009 (PDT)